On the Road – Coalgas and Water

In my very first iteration of Steam Highwayman, which was formatted in Twine (and a bad build of which can be found here), I included two trackers that each counted down from 100, subtracting 1 for each passage you read labelled as a location.  They were, of course, the fuel tank and the water tank of your Ferguson, and I hoped that a minor part of your roleplay as a dangerous villain astride a steam-powered machine would be the need to refuel and rewater it.

I’m not pretending that micromanaging a multiplicity of trackers is necessarily a great fit for a gamebook.  A good eurogame with its coloured cubes, or an extended solo roleplay campaign might benefit from them, but there was clearly a tension between needing to track a fuel gauge with its tiny increments and maintaining any kind of narrative flow, so I abandoned a fuel-and-water-tracker when I moved into paper.

The thing is, I’ve always wanted to include it, as the thematic elements are so strong, and the need to have a good supply would clearly be a real restriction on any outlaw trying to survive under the noses of the authorities.  So far, in volumes I-III, I’ve always let the reader assume that this minor matters are entirely under control, a bit like their need to eat or use the toilet.  Such things can make good narrative content, but not necessarily good gameplay.

But recently, as you’ll know if you’re following along, I’ve been thinking about specific and generic journey encounters.  What sort of events, I’ve wondered, should be happening again and again, in an extended campaign, as you ride up and down the roads of Cornwall and Devon?  Bad weather?  Absolutely – that was an easy one.  And then it came to me…  rather than accurately track how far a reader has travelled, as a computer could, this was the place to thematically introduce the need to refuel, or the consequences of running out of water.  This is where the tiny need to refuel or rewater could interrupt, annoy or reward a reader, deepening the simulation and using some of the ideas I had previously.  Some time ago – I think it was in Highways and Holloways – I introduced the customisation of the pump and filter – and there are one-off places to use it.  But it was intended to be something that would allow you to regain water on the move, and now it can.  Likewise, the enlarged fuel tank might help in MOTORING rolls (its main use to date), but it could also extend your range before needing to buy coalgas.  The need to buy coalgas and find water give you more reasons to visit freight yards and forges, more opportunities for conflict and reward.

So I’ve planned out repeating (generic) encounters for low water and a lack of coalgas that can populate the empty roads and journeys.  I’ll need to add a couple of tweaks into the adventure sheet (!), but other than that, the mechanics are all in place.  And hopefully, without becoming boring.

To give you a taste of what it might read like, here is the low-water encounter, formatted in Twine, for old-times sake.

Post-script: The Cubus app of Steam Highwayman: Smog & Ambuscade is in fact written in twine and compiled from there into the very attractive-looking game they produced.  It was the difficulties with exporting a paper gameplay (with its reliance on the reader’s ability to fill in gaps and act in character) back into a digital, computerised format that revealed and created the bugs that plague the app.  One of my long-terms aims is to work with Cubus to squash and fix all those bugs – some of which are minor, but some of which need input from them which is beyond me – and to see the app re-released in a much more playable, rewarding version.

The Seekerman Velosteam

Something wonderful happened when I handed over design of the Steam Highwayman’s constant mechanical companion to Ben: I lost control. I’ve detailed the process by which Ben and I worked out what the velosteam could, then might, and finally should look like, elsewhere, but for a lone-wolf like myself, this was a massive step forward in my creative process. Typically I’m something of a perfectionist and that prevents me bringing projects to completion. Sharing ownership helped me to break this cycle.

Early velosteam concepts, by Ben May.

The appearance of the machine was always going to be important. It would have been a complete cop-out to publish Smog and Ambuscade without a velosteam on the cover, and although I’m happy to leave a lot to my reader’s imaginations, including the appearance and much of the backstory of the hero of my gamebooks, the intentionally realist steampunk style I chose to borrow from Keith Roberts’ Pavane needed a velosteam design. It didn’t have to be completely plausible, but it did need to be unambiguous, legible and characterful.

Ben’s completed Ferguson Velosteam

Ben put a lot of hard work into that design and his solution of mantling the front portion of the vehicle was an inspired solution: it leaves a lot of the actual workings (including an improbable steering system, power transmission, water tank, boiler and firebox) to the imagination, but clearly communicates that this is a heavy, ironclad, steam-powered bicycle. And when he completed the alternate cover images for Smog and Ambuscade, I realised that the machine itself would become an iconic – perhaps the iconic – image associated with my stories.

Meanwhile, as Ben and I were hammering out the metaphorical boilerplate on the anvils of our imagination, two graphic novelists called Vincenzo Ferriero and Ray Chou were developing Skies of Fire. Like Steam Highwayman, Skies of Fire is a crowdfunded, steampunk (or arguably dieselpunk) publishing project. Whereas Steam Highwayman is of course a gamebook series, Skies of Fire is a compelling and attractive series of graphic novels, with a steadily growing international readership. I’ve been watching their Kickstarters from the sidelines with considerable interest, and if you’re interested in indie publishing, steampunk or graphic novels, I really recommend you do too.

The Seekerman Zephyr

In July 2018, Ray Chou posted a fascinating short article about his project. It included photographs and an account of the modelling of the Zephyr – the starring airship in Skies of Fire. I read this article over and over again, and then decided to do something really out of character: I reached out to the modelmaker who had built their airship and asked him whether he’d be interested in doing something similar for me.

The Steampunk Enigma that is Captain Seekerman

Lo and behold, Captain Seekerman got back to me in a steampunk flash. He immediately recognised the quality of Ben’s designs and so we began discussions of what sort of model I might like, what purpose it might serve, how functional it could be – and the very practical matters of time and money. I had complete confidence in his ability to produce something that would do justice to my story world and the existing illustrations, particularly because of Ray’s blog.

I’ll be posting again about the details of Nate Seekerman’s process in turning the two-dimensional designs into an eighteen inch, three dimensional, smoking, LED-lit model, but for now all I want to do is to honour his professionalism, artistry and craftsmanship. We messaged frequently over a period of several months and just a few days ago I received the completed model. I haven’t been able to stop grinning since. It’s currently standing on my bookshelf here in our living room, quietly biding its time.

First of all, this is a display model, so I really look forward to bringing it with me to future Steampunk Events, conventions and readings, to give existing fans another look at the design and to catch the eyes of potential Highwaymen-to-be. It won’t be living packed away in a box. But the Seekerman velosteam also has a function as an inspiration to me as a writer. It is the physical proof of the quality of one of my own ideas, first transmitted to an artist to draw, and now to a modelmaker to sculpt. To see it riding out of my book and into reality – however small – is a wonderful feeling.

My current plans to exhibit the model do have a few limitations, however! My wife and I are expecting our first child this summer and I’ve turned down several invitations to read and appear at June or July steampunk events. This means that my next appearance for sales (and possibly reading) will be at the gamebook convention, Fighting Fantasy Fest 3, on the 31st August in West London. This may well be the first public unveiling of Nate Seekerman’s work. It’ll be great to see any gamebook readers or enthusiasts there – watch out for a lot more about FFF3 on here soon.

If you want to see more of Nate Seekerman’s work or you’re inspired to see him bring your story to life, have a look at the Seeker Design Group. And if you’re interested in finding out more about this model, where it goes or how it was made, just watch out for my next updates here on the website.

Illustration Poll 1 Complete

I’m really pleased that so many backers have made time to share their preferences regarding the art of Steam Highwayman: Highways and Holloways.  I’ve just finished a phone conversation with Ben, in which we discussed the results of this poll:

You know by now that I love a graph.  Well, out of the eight options I gave backers (and you can see featurettes of the passages below…) there was a clear winner: everyone wants to see a velosteam chase, with constables astride their Imperial road engines.  Ben and I are both really happy about this: it’ll give him the chance to work with some of the other designs for the velosteam that he created last year.  Will an Imperial velosteam include some of those features?  I’m as excited to find out as you are.

We’re also going ahead on a feature of Captain Coke as our second full-page illustration.  He’s been an intriguing character throughout the writing of the book and I’ve enjoyed inventing him.  To see him take on flesh will be even more interesting…

The other options won’t disappear.  They’ll be developed as other options for illustrating the book, but may turn out as quarter or half-pages, depending on how successful the images seem once Ben’s had a go with them.  As soon as I mentioned punt jousting Ben grabbed a pencil and began to laugh, so I’ve certainly got hopes for that one…