Let’s have a few stats about Steam Highwayman II: Highways and Holloways.
- 1517 passages
- 270 pages
- 40+ unique illustrations
- 80 codewords
- 49 fights
- 174 skill checks
- Lots of beer
- 6 croquet hoops
I’ve been putting time into formatting the pages over the last few days. This is a tricky and laborious process, because the column layout that allows me to fit an average of 6 passages on each page is easily upset. When passages leave ‘widows’ or ‘orphans’ – the small lines of text separated from the main body of their text – it produces an ugly page and, more frustratingly, a confusing one. This means that each column on each page has to be vertically aligned manually, and I haven’t been able to do this until Ben’s recent submission of the inter-textual vignette illustrations.
However, since they have all been finished I’ve been plugging them in and tweaking the column lengths. This can also include tiny pieces of editing and re-writing to add or remove a line here and there.
I’ve also had a recommendation from a backer to make the passage numbers stand out a little more. After experimenting with a few methods and taking some advice, I’ve settled for the nice decorative flourishes – two standard Wingdings characters – that you can see on this sample page. I think this helps and looks smart too. There was also a suggestion of adding a number to the top of the page indicating which passages are there to help with locating them when moving between the book, but I haven’t been able to find a way of doing this that doesn’t significantly add to the page count. A small header might seem like a little thing to add, but the body text is already close to the margins dictated by the printers, and keeping legibility is my priority.
So this is what the internal pages are currently looking like. I hope, like me, you feel it is an improvement. It does give me a few longer-term ideas about design and illustration, but I’ll save those for The Reeking Metropolis.