I’ve put in several solid days and a few evenings this fortnight. What’s happened to the draft? I have…
- Begun to reorganise and check the rumours
- Complained about the quality of some copper
- Added some rhinos, filling in a great Cornish location, connecting up a mechanic that I had pre-written and creating a new friendship. The rhinos even get an illustration.
- Put a trap in an otherwise-helpful location…
- Written a party in Barnstaple
- Created a network selling performance-enhancing pills… This has quite a backstory.
- Written the final beer – with some choices in exactly how you receive it, which was fun.
- Continued the list of achievements for The Reeking Metropolis.
- Worked on the touring guide to accompany Princes of the West.
- Filled in a brewery,
- Used a quay.
- Removed some flowers.
- Cut a fishing trip (there’s already plenty of fish)
- Checked and corrected the border crossings
- Checked and corrected the Solidarity Point systems
- Cut rabbits
That means I haven’t completed some of the tasks I wanted to last update. Lundy is still to complete, although several of the modules listed above relate to it directly. I haven’t corrected anyone’s inconsistent accent. That’s all to come. But I’m getting closer and closer to the moment when I can stop.
Right now there’s a crying baby on my lap, so I’m going to stop here.
Next update due: 19.12.25